Writer Point requested me to make sure I do not write in second person because I wrote you
and your on my paper. I also was suggested; “All” or “all of” used as an intensifier can very often be
removed with no loss of meaning. I was also told to eliminate run-on sentences to and commas in
between my writing. To fix also were unless it’s a passive voice and completed on time. Write Point also
said that a citation quote also ends with a page number. A Doctorial rule that was suggested to use a
different work for get because it can mean a lot of different things, so for this to change it to receive,
retain or any other word that is more specific. I was told that I cannot write “that’s” that I need to spell
it out as that is.
Due to Writer Point I think I will do all of changes as I go along, because I’m sending it every time
I fix the first mistake. Something Writer Point no matter how many times you send it through there you
will always get it back finding things wrong on paper. The more I send it the better my writing will get
the more I will learn to write a better paper. I anticipate to be writing a successful persuasive paper but
at time will get hard to have more details and feedback. I will have a hard time to write in third person
because I can give my point of view in write in first person. So I got to get out of habit in writing the
word were. Other than these things I think I have a hand on writing my paper.
I know my paper will persuade the reader that Attention Deficit Disorder (ADD) ruins peoples’
life. there are a lot of different treatments but I will talk about the most important number one witch is
taking medication to treat ADD. I will tell you about to main medications and how they work and how it
helps me. I will tell you the effect medication has on a person with ADD and how it helps Control ADD to
live a better life. I will explain also how you can only get the medications prescribe from a psychiatrist. I
am living a great example of it. I will tell you about Addarell and Ritalin and what the effect is and what
they pill is made off. Also the side effects and how some time doctors prescribe you tot ake another
medication with it.